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How did you have the patience to make this animation!? It´s so fluid and well done. Everything is just awesome! Great work!

I don´t know how the movie is for other people, but for me it cuts back to the "PLAY" button when the text is about to dissapear. You should look into that.

oladitan responds:

oops. sorry about that.
reuploaded longer version. thank you.

So some tips:

Good joke, it made me smile.

You have to make the audio and the music more clear, for me at least, so I can hear them clearly.

And it would be nice with a start and replay button and you should make the music stop at the end of the movie.

That´s all. Keep it up and become great. =)

thomasBaldwin responds:

im animating 120 pages when i get all those done im going to redo that audio a bit cause the songs i have on these right now arent the ones that are going to be on the finnished thing so theres 6 issues of the SOUP! comics each one is 20 pages each and i have a album for each issue that goes along with them so when the entire thing is done im going to use the audio from those albums for the cartoons the next cartoon is a 5 page comic which i just finnished animating i have to do the voices still ALSO IM DOING THIS ALL ON MY LAPTOP cause my other computers mouse is a piece of shit so im using the laptops built in mic if you guys want i can ad in the speach bubbles from the comics and i was thinkin about the music i wasnt sure if you guys wanted to hear the entire song so i just left it in

so once i get the rest of the comics animated for this first issue ill reupload the first animated issue im just wanted to see how you guys would react to this stuff

and i appreciate your imput :)

It´s not bad. Things that you might want to look into to make it even better =)

1. The audio. You could try to look into how to remove noice from the actuall audio. Try to export the audio track from the movie software you´re using and then use the free software audacity to remove noise. (You can find tutorials if you google "audacity how to remove noise")

2. Talk a bit clearer. Try to make it sound more understandable. You can still talk fast but to make it sound funny you have to hear what you´re saying.

3. Keep the shortness of this one and tr to make another and then try to implement all the tips I gave you above. Good luck. =)

Not bad. It wasn´t THAT funny, but it still was good and simple. So don´t feel down about it, just keep making animations and improve. It was much better then most under judgment post, so good job =)

So frekking awesome! i laughed so hard. The Mayo guy! XD Thanks for making me laugh today! =D Hope the same happens to you...the laughter that is. XD

When he actually used the drugs and the weird shit happened, I laughed...hard! XD Nice one there Frostdrive =)

You just need to clarify the joke a bit more. It would be funnier if he would be sharpened and that´s is why he is screaming. Anyway it´s not bad for a first animatino keep it up =D

Made me smile! It´s so true and it was original aswell. I have always felt like this. I like how things are shaping up and loking up for you. Told you that you would reach great heights. The animation is starting to look really classy now. The only thing that I noticed was a little bit of lack of emotion in the voiceacting. But I know I have a hard time to do emotional voiceacting when someones around.

I say keep it up and you will see that more than 40 people will like your stuff 8)

FrostDrive responds:

Thanks man!
I totally understand your point with the voice acting.

now though, I'm about to complete this acting class I took this semester, so nowadays I'd be able to do a bit better with the voice acting. x3

So true! This shows exactly how ridicolus it really is!

The animation is outstanding. Very well drawn and colored. The sound quality is awesome too. Keep this up!

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