Thanks for the peptalk in the description, I really needed it today =S.
The song is cute and light, so great work on that too. The only thing that could be looked at a tiny bit, is the beginning, and all the reappearances of it throughout the song. It feels a bit "empty" so to speak. It seems to be lacking something, I don't really know what so I leave it to you to figure it out =P
But keep up the good work and keep pushing through the hard times yourself! =D
Reminds me of like going with a train, so yeah, kind of like a trip to somewhere! =D Very nice and fresh. And I agree with you, it's always awesome when you feel in a good mood and make an awesome track because it's like the mood gets stuck in the piece itself.
And because I'm writing this as I'm listening, I got to the part where it gets more "moody" and "full". Awesome feel right there! =)
I can't add any criticism because I can only say, good melody, very good mixing with the highs not cutting into my ears and finally very nice structure. Just keep it up and try to keep the awesome feeling that you got from this track and thanks for sharing that feel with us! =D
PS. It says that there aren't any tags, so maybe you want to check that out. ;)
It was a really good remix! =D The only downside is that for me at least, it felt like there should have been a drop and then some heavy bassline, but thatÂ´s may just might be a matter o taste. =) Nice job!
Thanks! Would loved to have done some stuff with drops and wobbles, but I made this with GarageBand and my software instrument choices are a tad limited at the moment. Maybe I'll do a VIP remix one day :P
It sounds really nice. Sounds a little bit like it would be the creditsÂ´ song or the music for the intro or the trailer. Nicely done! =D The only "bad" thing would be that it sounds a bit atonal(?) or how you say it in english, at some point. Like when it really climaxed and the chorus came in. I might think it was deliberate, but maybe you could try next time, to make it sound tonal and one atonal, so you hear which one is better. Now I know that this is since long abandoned but just some tips to try in the future =)
Very true what you say
Well I´m in a phase of the flue so I can´t focus enough to write something you could improve, but I can cheer you on. What you say in your description is very true. Just continue like this and you may end up big =)
Oh, one thing I liked about the song is the structure. It was very well made with a build up and a nice "relaxing" ending.
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