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[Fringe Pt 1]

Ok so feedback. =) I'm just going to make a list because it's pretty late where I live and I'm to tired to make it super constructive. =P

1. Try using a preloader.
2. Learn more about VCAM (I think I saw you using it)
3. Try to finish stuff somehow before you upload it. I don't know if it is allowed to upload previews, but who knows. Maybe you should read the wiki under the "community" panel. =)

All in all, not bad! =D Pretty fluid and I like the slo-mo effects. Keep it up, make a few touch ups here and there and it will be really good. =)

Audiomasterz responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback It really helps :)
Can i just ask though :P Whats a preloader o.0 haha

Thanks again :)

Audiomasterz.......

[Cootie Catchers]

I could give you some things to improve. =)

1. Try to find audio that is a bit clearer. Use audacity (program) to delete some of the back noice (I think the option is called noise reduction).

2. Choose when to use the "boiling" effect. In this case it´s not really necessary. It´s more when things get a bit too static that you should use it.

3. Try to experiment with different camera angels. Like when he is holding the white thing up (I don´t know what it´s called), you could make a closeup so that you get some variety and so that you can make out what he is holding up.

Other than that, it´s a really neat idea to make short comic skits about comedians. Keep it up and keep improving and this will be awesome! =D

[Fb#6: Dark Souls]

Work a little bit on the audio, like use your own voice. Other than that, the animation was really good! =D Keep it up! =)

FbMan responds:

The audio was actually from a JonTron episode I linked in the description, that's why the enemy was a parrot, its a reference to the show. Thanks for the feedback though! :)

[Little Bunny Foo Foo: No Evil 008]

Beautifully animated! =D And the sound was spot on as well. Fluent animation, there was too. Great job, keep it up!! =D

PS. The singing was very in(?) key! Nice! =D

[test]

It was not bad at all! =D In fact if you just fixed some perspective issues and made some sound adjustments, it would be a really atmospheric movie. It was good and I liked that you didn´t do any voice acting it enhanced the mood. 3/5 =D

[Yolo]

Not bad at all! =D It was really unexpected and the animation was not bad at all and pretty fluid. Good music choice and great work on your first animation! Keep it up! =D

[ADVENTURE BABIES - SODAR]

For me there was nothing wrong with the audio, except when the bird gets angry with the guy in a cap and screams, then I would have had him scream more distorted, but that´s more with the voice acting which is otherwise perfect =)

The animation is incredibly stunning and well done, I can´t stop laughing at that baby with the eyes! XDXD He is the most funny character I have seen in 15 years. Thanks for the laughs and can´t WAIT FOR EPISODE 2! =D