MEANDNOONEELSE's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fringe Pt 1]

Ok so feedback. =) I'm just going to make a list because it's pretty late where I live and I'm to tired to make it super constructive. =P

1. Try using a preloader.
2. Learn more about VCAM (I think I saw you using it)
3. Try to finish stuff somehow before you upload it. I don't know if it is allowed to upload previews, but who knows. Maybe you should read the wiki under the "community" panel. =)

All in all, not bad! =D Pretty fluid and I like the slo-mo effects. Keep it up, make a few touch ups here and there and it will be really good. =)

Audiomasterz responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback It really helps :)
Can i just ask though :P Whats a preloader o.0 haha

Thanks again :)

Audiomasterz.......

[Man getting Gas test]

I think that the file size is a bit too big so the movie won´t even start. I think the limit is 15 or 30 MB? I´m not sure but you might find that kind of information in the wiki under the "Community" panel. =)

Clyphe responds:

Oh dude thanks for helping me. I've been trying to figure out whats been wrong with it all day, lol

[Fb#6: Dark Souls]

Work a little bit on the audio, like use your own voice. Other than that, the animation was really good! =D Keep it up! =)

FbMan responds:

The audio was actually from a JonTron episode I linked in the description, that's why the enemy was a parrot, its a reference to the show. Thanks for the feedback though! :)

[Drill-Arm Gun-Hand]

I don´t know how the movie is for other people, but for me it cuts back to the "PLAY" button when the text is about to dissapear. You should look into that.

oladitan responds:

oops. sorry about that.
reuploaded longer version. thank you.

[NECROPHELIACS]

So some tips:

Good joke, it made me smile.

You have to make the audio and the music more clear, for me at least, so I can hear them clearly.

And it would be nice with a start and replay button and you should make the music stop at the end of the movie.

That´s all. Keep it up and become great. =)

thomasBaldwin responds:

im animating 120 pages when i get all those done im going to redo that audio a bit cause the songs i have on these right now arent the ones that are going to be on the finnished thing so theres 6 issues of the SOUP! comics each one is 20 pages each and i have a album for each issue that goes along with them so when the entire thing is done im going to use the audio from those albums for the cartoons the next cartoon is a 5 page comic which i just finnished animating i have to do the voices still ALSO IM DOING THIS ALL ON MY LAPTOP cause my other computers mouse is a piece of shit so im using the laptops built in mic if you guys want i can ad in the speach bubbles from the comics and i was thinkin about the music i wasnt sure if you guys wanted to hear the entire song so i just left it in

so once i get the rest of the comics animated for this first issue ill reupload the first animated issue im just wanted to see how you guys would react to this stuff

and i appreciate your imput :)

[Life In A Nutshell]

Made me smile! It´s so true and it was original aswell. I have always felt like this. I like how things are shaping up and loking up for you. Told you that you would reach great heights. The animation is starting to look really classy now. The only thing that I noticed was a little bit of lack of emotion in the voiceacting. But I know I have a hard time to do emotional voiceacting when someones around.

I say keep it up and you will see that more than 40 people will like your stuff 8)

FrostDrive responds:

Thanks man!
I totally understand your point with the voice acting.

now though, I'm about to complete this acting class I took this semester, so nowadays I'd be able to do a bit better with the voice acting. x3

[Pokemon Bash]

Very good =)

Now you´re really getting into animation. It was a fun animation, and as others has mentioned, the voice acting could be improved, though you say, you want to focuse more on getting better at art. You could team up with a good voiceactor.

Congratz on FP =D

OnionsXD responds:

Hey Thanks dude!
Yeh I want to get better at art. Actually today I just figured out a better way to draw, and color.
After my next cartoon (my halloween one)

I'm going to start drawing that new way and coloring differently as well. I think it'll work out quite well. :D

[How to get chicks]

It was really funny!

Omg...it really worked...

No, but seriously. I think it was well done. A little bit hard to hear the big monster, but the most hilarious part was when I clicked this because of hopes that it would give me some real life advise...You really got me there Oney. XP

Seankiely responds:

cool thanks im glad u liked it but i sean made it not oney :P

[Cristo and the Gorilla!]

Really good!

I was really well made. One can tell that you took your time on this one. The best part was "alla the moving parts" and where the gorilla destroyed the room. Good job man.

Cristo responds:

The gorilla destroying the room was my favorite part too! Thanks for the 10/10!

[Kos! Madness]

Awesome!

All nice and in theme good work!

Ps. The old lady somehow looks like something I have seen =P

OnionsXD responds:

Haha, wait what? I dunno what your talking about....with the old lady.....