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Ok so feedback. =) I'm just going to make a list because it's pretty late where I live and I'm to tired to make it super constructive. =P

1. Try using a preloader.
2. Learn more about VCAM (I think I saw you using it)
3. Try to finish stuff somehow before you upload it. I don't know if it is allowed to upload previews, but who knows. Maybe you should read the wiki under the "community" panel. =)

All in all, not bad! =D Pretty fluid and I like the slo-mo effects. Keep it up, make a few touch ups here and there and it will be really good. =)

Audiomasterz responds:

Thanks a lot for the feedback It really helps :)
Can i just ask though :P Whats a preloader o.0 haha

Thanks again :)

Audiomasterz.......

Work a little bit on the audio, like use your own voice. Other than that, the animation was really good! =D Keep it up! =)

FbMan responds:

The audio was actually from a JonTron episode I linked in the description, that's why the enemy was a parrot, its a reference to the show. Thanks for the feedback though! :)

I don´t know how the movie is for other people, but for me it cuts back to the "PLAY" button when the text is about to dissapear. You should look into that.

oladitan responds:

oops. sorry about that.
reuploaded longer version. thank you.

Made me smile! It´s so true and it was original aswell. I have always felt like this. I like how things are shaping up and loking up for you. Told you that you would reach great heights. The animation is starting to look really classy now. The only thing that I noticed was a little bit of lack of emotion in the voiceacting. But I know I have a hard time to do emotional voiceacting when someones around.

I say keep it up and you will see that more than 40 people will like your stuff 8)

FrostDrive responds:

Thanks man!
I totally understand your point with the voice acting.

now though, I'm about to complete this acting class I took this semester, so nowadays I'd be able to do a bit better with the voice acting. x3

Very good =)

Now you´re really getting into animation. It was a fun animation, and as others has mentioned, the voice acting could be improved, though you say, you want to focuse more on getting better at art. You could team up with a good voiceactor.

Congratz on FP =D

OnionsXD responds:

Hey Thanks dude!
Yeh I want to get better at art. Actually today I just figured out a better way to draw, and color.
After my next cartoon (my halloween one)

I'm going to start drawing that new way and coloring differently as well. I think it'll work out quite well. :D

It was really funny!

Omg...it really worked...

No, but seriously. I think it was well done. A little bit hard to hear the big monster, but the most hilarious part was when I clicked this because of hopes that it would give me some real life advise...You really got me there Oney. XP

Seankiely responds:

cool thanks im glad u liked it but i sean made it not oney :P

Really good!

I was really well made. One can tell that you took your time on this one. The best part was "alla the moving parts" and where the gorilla destroyed the room. Good job man.

Cristo responds:

The gorilla destroying the room was my favorite part too! Thanks for the 10/10!

Awesome!

All nice and in theme good work!

Ps. The old lady somehow looks like something I have seen =P

OnionsXD responds:

Haha, wait what? I dunno what your talking about....with the old lady.....

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